Tuesday, March 20, 2012

exercise 2

"In her novel, Cruddy, Lynda Barry use of brusque, crude, and cacophonous language depicts and establishes the narrator’s dreary outlook on her gloomy life."
              error type 1

" The writer seem unable to reach a peace in which she is able to write. "
              error type 4

There is also an anger " I WILL KILL YOU IF YOU TOUCH THIS...."
              error type 3

"it makes the reader feel as though this book will be depressing or maybe even gives them the impression..."
             error type 4

my favorite post would have to be My Minds Eye, love the vocabulary and the atmosphere they gave.

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